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Disaster Zone or Bedroom Sometimes I wonder if I walked into a disaster zone or my bedroom? It is pretty messy but its not all my stuff. My brother and I share a room. We have bunkbeds and boy, they are neat and there also high and extremely comfortable. Its like a feather nest. My closet is so dirty and crammed full, but it's full of memories because I have all my old schoolwork from the past years. It is as packed as the mall at christmas time. It has my school and play clothes in it too. I really like my noisy stereo because when I'm bored, I can always turn on an peppy song. I listen to it when I am doing my homework. I like all kinds of music, but Country is my favorite. I have CDs stacked all over the place. When I am in my room I feel comfortable and peaceful because it's about the only place thats quiet. When it is clean, I feel very proud of myself.
How would you rate this essay on content? Give it a score of 1 (low) to 6 (high). There are at least 6 mechanical errors. Can you circle them?
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