Student Compositions

Talbott Elementary School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been exciting. It is the greatest place. I think it is a good place to study. It’s a special place, with a bunch of kids to learn from. It’s very fun to work there, it’s so much fun.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been outstanding. My classmates are very nice and so is Mrs. Tyrell. It was really hard being a new student, but now I don’t have to worry. Mrs. Tyrell makes learning fun and exciting. I’ve learned a lot in fourth grade, and I hop to learn a lot in fifth grade, too.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been inspirationally interesting. We do a lot of very scientific but entertaining projects. I think Talbott Elementary School has the most superior fourth grade in the world!

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been new and interesting. We learn new things every day. I especially learn a lot in social studies because it is interesting. We have new social studies books. Forth grade is still kind of hard, but I’m getting better in school. I love fourth grade.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been helpful. It has helped me a lot because it’s getting me ready for fifth grade. It has been helping me learn things that I didn’t know before. Fourth grade is preparing me for the future. It has been great in fourth grade. I love fourth grade very much!

Rush Strong School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been spectacular. I’ve got an awesome teacher her name is Mrs. Greenlee. She has us wrapped up in her fingers. We get popcorn when we get ten compliments! Fourth grade is excellent, great, awesome, terrific, spectacular, and I love it.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been stupendous. This year we have the greatest teacher. We are going to be excellent before we get out of this class. I think this is going to be a wonderful year. I am feeling awesome about fourth grade.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been marvelous. My teacher is the very best! I’m pleased that I’m learning so much stuff. This is a very interesting class. I feel welcome in the fourth grade.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been exciting. You get popcorn parties when you have ten compliments or if people make a 100 when it is very hard. The class might get to go outside if they are excellent. The food is terrific. I feel excited to be in Mrs. Greenlee’s class.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been wonderful. My teacher, Mrs. Greenlee has been spectacular. She has everyone under control. The work is a little more difficult. I feel that I’m going to have a fabulous year.

Piedmont Elementary School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been fantastic. I am making awesome grades. The classmates have been superb. This year I have a terrific teacher. My school year has been very exciting so far.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been marvelous. We work on math. We have a wonderful time in reading. We play outside every day. I feel fabulous.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been marvelous. We have an excellent class. I like our teacher she is very nice. Fourth grade is stupendous.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been great. School is outstanding when it comes to math. We have already did six weeks of school. Fourth grade has many challenges and surprises. I think I am doing very well in fourth grade.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been fabulous. It was a very good day when we got snow cones. We did science project seeds. I had an excellent time doing the reading project. School is awesome.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been excellent. My teacher is really great! The class is very nice. The people in the school are outstanding. This is wonderful!

Jefferson Elementary School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been great. My teacher, Mrs. Muncy taught me the constitution. Now my class is getting ready to go to Aquarium of the Smokies. I have never been there before. I like fourth grade because it is full of exciting and interesting things to do.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been fantastic. I am happy because we get to go on the field trip to the aquarium. I love my teacher, Mrs. Muncy. Mrs. Muncy is the best teacher. I feel fourth grade is the best.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been wonderful. In fourth grade, we do a lot of hard work. We get to play outside. If we are mean, we go to detention. I like fourth grade a lot.

I don’t know about you but so far fourth grade is going excellent. You don’t have to do as much work as you did in third grade. In third grade, you have to work 24-7. In fourth grade, you get to experiment on things and you can bring stuff for show and tell. You also earn pizza coupons for reading however many books your teacher tells you to a month. That is really neat because I love to read and I love pizza. I have already gotten a coupon for reading a really big book.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been great. Today we get ice cream and it will be delicious. Then the next month we get to go to on the internet and take a virtual field trip. In fourth grade, it is super fantastic.

Dandridge Elementary School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been wonderful. I like math because we do awesome things like bar graphs. Spelling is outstanding because we get to copy our spelling words three times each. Fourth grade is exciting because we have the best teacher in the school.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been stupendous. Mrs. Sams is the best teacher in fourth grade history. We do not have much math homework. All of us learn new things every day. Fourth grade is the best year of my life.

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been great. We have had a book fair. Then we had a slide show. We are going to go on a field trip, I hope. I think fourth grade is great.

So far my experience in fourth grade has been outstanding. I like fourth grade because it is hard. Sometimes math is hard and sometimes it is easy. In math, we learn about times tables. Fourth grade is so stupendous.

So far, my experience in fourth grade is awesome! I am one of the two best readers because I could read in pre-school! We do homework and it is very stupendous! Reading is experienced to me and I like to read over fourth grade level! I think fourth grade is more outstanding than third grade!!!!

New Market Elementary School

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been exciting. Learning to do math, spelling, and reading is so fascinating. Having free time almost every day is wonderful. What I like most is seeing my teacher. I find fourth grade wonderful.

So far, my experience in the fourth grade has been wonderful. We get to go outside. We don’t do hard work. We get to eat ice cream. I think fourth grade is wonderful.

So far, my experience in the fourth grade has been terrific. We eat fantastic food. We get to play. We get to learn exciting stuff. I think fourth grade is excellent.

So far, my experiences in fourth grade have been exciting. I have played kickball in gym class. I think I have the most exciting teacher. I find fourth grade fascinating!

So far, my experience in fourth grade has been wonderful. My teacher is fantastic. I have made terrific friends. My classroom is beautiful. Fourth grade is very exciting!

Easter Island has a lesson for us to remember today. It is a tiny island in the South Pacific. The land was created by a volcanoe which led the island to have volcanic soil and jagged edges.

The islanders stated making thousands of statues. Scientists used to think aliens or natives of the Lost City of Atlantis made them, but they discovered the true crafters. The people who built them had a huge obsession with making the statues.

Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. After the trees were used, there was nothing to protect the soil sot he land eroded. Today, we too could find ourselves fighting for the important things we desperately need. Jacob

Easter island has a leason for us to remember today. It is a tiny island in the South Pacific. When the volcanos erupted, the soil left was very rich. The islanders started making thousands of statues. The statues were maid by moi plus they were shapes of of people. Natural-resources like wood where wasted in the movement of statues. The soil eroded, so the crops failed. Today we too could find ourselves in the same situation if we waste are Natural Resources. We have had an exciting field trip, it also gave us a leason. Amy

Easter Island has a lesson for us to remember today. It is found in the South Pacific. The island was made by a volcano making the soil very rich. The islanders started making thousands of statues. They were very tall. Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. All the crops failed. Today we too could find ourselves in the same situation if we waste natural resources. Shantel

Easter Island has a lesson for us to remember today. It is a tiny island in the South Pacific. Today there are many volcano cones. Easter Island has many palm trees and sharp ragged rocks on the island. The islanders started making thousands of statues. The statues we think were made for worship. They carved these Statues from moia. Moia comes from the inside of a volcano. The statues were placed around the edges of the island. Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. Today we could find ourselves wasting our resources if we don’t use them wisely. Amber

Easter island has a lesson for us to remember today. It is a tiny island in the south pacific. Easter island has jagged edges, is near Hawaii, and has volcanic soil. The islanders started making thousands of statues. The statues were made from moia. Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. When the soil slid down the hill, the crops died. Today we, too, could find ourselves in the same shape if we waste our natral resources. Mike

Easter island has a lesson for us to remember today. It is a tiny island in the South Pacific. At Easter island you will not find many people there.

The islanders started making thousands of statues. The statues are different sizes and different looks.

Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. When the natives ran out of tress they ran out of food and people started fighting. Today we could find ourselves wasting natual resources if we don’t take care of them. Jeffrey

Wow! What a lesson I learned from Easter Island. It is a small island in the South Pacific. Surprise! It has about a thousand statues! The islanders making them and came obessed with them. The stuff they made them with was moai. Natural resources like wood were wasted and the people turned into cannibalism. Yuck! That was some real violence. Could we find ourselves in their place today? Yes, if we waste all of our natural resources. Aaron

Wow! What a lesson I learned at Easter Island. It is very and looks like a tiny dot. It’s located in the South Pacific. There are caves, volcanoes, and statues there too. Few people live on the island. The islanders made statues out of moai. And the statues they made were big and interestingly carved and shaped. They became such an obsession people started wasting they’re natural resources since they did use plants to slide them down. They had so much cannibalism that there was even few people on the island. Today we too could loose our natural resources. But hopefully we’ll help each other and not waste them. Lydia

Easter Island has a lesson for us to remember today. Easter Island is found in the South Pacific. It looks like a small dot. There is tons of caves and volcanoes. The islanders started making thousands of statues. All the statues made were made of moai and all had a shape and size. Natural resources like wood were wasted in the movement of statues. Crops were flooded and then there was violence called cannibalism. Today we too could find ourselves without any resource of any kind or version. Brittany

Last Christmas, I had a petite surprise. At 12:00 pm, I heard a noise in the bathroom. Quickly, I jumped up to see if it was Santa Clause! Slowly, I went downstairs. I saw a scary man putting toys under the tree. I was so afraid. I was scared. I went outside to scream without waking somebody. When he heard me leaving, the man went up the chimney and took off with his sleigh. I looked back at the man and said, “Sorry.” I decided to go back inside because I felt bad. The man said, “Ho, ho, ho.” I am glad that he went away.

Last Christmas, I had a fantastic morning. As I was in the living room, I heard a noise. Frightened, I jumped up to go look outside. I slowly went down the stairs. I saw a fat man walking around. I was so afraid I tackled him. I went outside to catch him. When he heard me leaving the man jumped up. I looked back at the man and said “Ho, ho, ho.” I decided to go back inside because I wanted to know what he left. The man ran up stairs. Boy, am I glad I got my presents back!

Last Christmas, I had a real neat surprise. At 10:00 p.m., I heard a noise as I was sleeping in my bed. Frightened, I jumped up to find out what or who was in the house. Quickly, I went down the stairs. I saw a fat, old man. He was building a fort with snow balls. I was so afraid I jumped out of my pants. I went outside to run away. When he heard me leaving the man ran outside. I looked back at the man and said, “ Who are you?” I decided to go back inside because I wanted to catch the crook. The man flew off with his reindeer. Boy, am I glad that it was just my neighbor.

Last Christmas, I had an exciting surprise. Late at night I heard a noise as I was in the living room. Quickly, I jumped up to see what it was. Quietly, I went downstairs. I saw a scary man watching football. I was so afraid. I quickly and loudly screamed. When he heard me coming, he broke down the door. I heard noises coming from the man. I looked around and said, “You scared me out of my bloomers.” I would get a whipping if I had done that to someone. The man was outside climbing in my window. Boy, am I glad it was Santa and his elves.

Last Christmas, I had an exquisite surprise. At midnight, I heard a noise as I was combing my hair. Horrified, I jumped up to hurry down stairs to see if someone was hurt. Quickly and quietly, I went downstairs. I saw an energetic, fat pale man taking away all of my beautifully wrapped presents. I was so afraid I ran to the bathroom to splash cold water on my fact to make sure I was not dreaming. I went outside to grab some wood to bonk him on the head. When he heard me leaving the man followed me cautiously. I looked at the man and said “Get out of my house you creep!” I decided to go back inside because I wanted to check and see if the presents were still there. The man vanished into thick ashes. Boy, am I glad it was only a dream.

Last Christmas, I had an exquisite surprise. I heard a noise as I was sleeping. When I was sitting on the stairs, I jumped up to find out what the noise was. I was creeping down the stairs. I saw a crazy man going to the bathroom. I was so afraid I started screaming. I went outside to get cold. When he heard me leaving the man ran after me. I looked back at the man and said, “Who are you and what are you doing hear?” I decided to go back inside because he started chasing me. The man was a cookie and milk thief. Boy, am I glad I ate the cookies and milk first.

Last grand Christmas, I had a sidesplitting surprise. I heard a noise as I was climbing out of bed. Quickly, I jumped up to see what it was. I got my clothes on and went down the stairs rapidly. I saw a huge man running. I was so afraid I ran upstairs to get my snappers to throw at his feet. I went outside while throwing snappers at him. I went outside to avoid the hideous sight. When he heard me leaving the man said, “Stop!” I looked back at the man. I decided to go back inside because I heard something. The man whom was my dad straightened up and ran to the bathroom crying. Boy, am I glad he is my dad.

Last Christmas, I had an exquisite surprise. I heard a noise as I was sleeping. Hilariously, I jumped up to say “Santa’s here! Santa’s here!” I went downstairs very dreary. I saw a red guy who had a beard and he was cleaning and dusting our house. I was so afraid I hit him. I went outside to collect some snow. When he heard me leaving the man said, “Thanks for the cookies and milk.” I looked back at the man and said, “Who are you, cause you are sure not Santa Clause.” I decided to go back inside because it was bad. The man finally got his piece of junk car started and sped up into the sky. Boy, am I glad it was dad.

Last Christmas, I had a fabulous surprise. I heard a noise as I was in the bed. Excitedly, I jumped up. I went down stairs calmly. I saw an ugly man putting presents under the tree. I was so afraid I yelled for my dad. I went outside to get my mom and dad. When he heard me leaving, the man chased me around the yard. I looked back at the man and said “Where did you come from?” I went back inside to wake my mom and dad up. The man had left. Boy, am I glad that was Santa Claus.

Last Christmas, I had a great surprise. I heard a noise as I was eating. Quickly, I jumped up to go see what the noise was. Cautiously, I went downstairs. I saw a big man merrily eating cookies. I was so afraid I ran back upstairs and hid. I went outside to look on the roof. When he heard me leaving, the man ran into the wall. I looked back at the man and asked, “Are you all right?” I decided to go back because he was raiding the fridge. The man was looking for cookies and milk. Boy, am I glad he was Santa Claus.

Last Christmas I had a super cool surprise. I heard a noise as I was in the North Pole. Nervously, I jumped up to go run into my mom’s bedroom. Slowly, I went down stairs. I saw a hideous man putting presents under the tree. I was so afraid I went to my mom’s bedroom quickly. I went outside to get away from the hideous man. When he heard me leaving the man chased me. I looked back at the man and said, “I’ll hit you.” I decided to go back inside because I was going to lock him out. The man got hit with a shovel because my dad came out to see what was going on. Boy, am I glad that he could not get in so I was safe.

Last Christmas, I had a crazy surprise. I heard a noise as I was slowly walking down the hall. Quickly, I jumped up to get my gun. Dangerously, I went down stairs. I saw a huge man trying to put nuts under my tree. I was so afraid I hit him. I went outside to get my gun out of the shed. When he heard me leave the man chased me. I looked back at the man and said, “You better let me go now.” I decided to go back inside because he told me that he was crazy and he let me go. The man stayed outside. Boy, am I glad it was only Uncle Buck.

Last Christmas, I had an exciting surprise. I heard a noise as I was slowly walking down stairs. Nervously, I jumped up to run. I nervously ran down the stairs. I saw a fat big bearded man. I saw a huge man coming upstairs. I was so afraid I started screaming and ran upstairs. I went outside to go to my neighbors. When he heard me leaving the man snuck out the back window. I looked back and said “Stay back!” I decided to go back inside because the man came outside. I locked the door. The man started to beat on the door but he could not get in. Boy, am I glad that he didn’t steal our stuff.

Last Christmas, I had a wonderful surprise. I heard a noise as I was frustrated. Cautiously, I jumped up to go down stairs to see who was there. Excitedly, I jumped up. I saw a fat man putting presents under my tree and eating my cookies. I was so afraid I screamed. I went outside to hide. When he heard me leaving, the man ran after me. I looked back at the man and asked, “What are you doing hear?” I decided to go back inside because I wanted to wake my parents up. The man flew away. Boy, am I glad I saw Santa.

Last Christmas, I had a fantastic surprise. I heard a noise as I was walking. Calmly, I jumped up to see what the noise was. Calmly, I went down stairs. I saw a hideous man putting presents under our tree. I was so afraid I screamed. I went outside to yell for help. When he saw me leaving the man ran quickly. I turned around and said, “Who are you?” I decided to go back inside to see what he had done. The man had left. Boy, am I glad he left all the presents behind.

Last Christmas, I had a fabulous surprise. I heard a noise as I was sleeping. Quickly, I jumped up to safely look around. Quickly, I ran down stairs. I saw a big fat man putting presents under the tree. I was so afraid I ran back up stairs. I went outside to look. When he heard me leaving, the man turned around. I looked back at the man and said, “What are you doing here?” I decided to go back inside because it was freezing outside. The man climbed to the top of the house. Boy, am I glad he was not a robber.

Last Christmas, I had a spectacular surprise. I heard a noise. Quickly, I jumped up to go the dining room. Slowly, I went downstairs. I saw a super fat man eating cake. I was so afraid I could not sleep. I went outside to get snow balls. When he heard me leaving, the man ran after me. I looked back at the man and said, “Who are you?” I decided to go back inside to wake up my mom and dad. The man just disappeared. Boy, am I glad he’s locked out.

Last Christmas, I had a beautiful surprise. I heard a noise as I was sleeping. Quickly, I jumped up to get a baseball bat. Silently, I went up stairs. I saw a hairy man getting the surprises. I was so afraid I hit him with the baseball bat. I went outside to see who it was. When he heard me leaving, the man looked up in the sky. I looked at the man and asked, “What are you doing with our presents?” I decided to go back inside because I was going to hit him again. The man disappeared. Boy, am I glad he’s gone.

Last Christmas, I had a beautiful surprise. I heard a noise as I was in the kitchen. I quickly jumped up to tell Lance Bass and Will Smith. Slowly, I went downstairs. I saw a nerdy man eating cookies. I was so afraid I wet my pants. I went outside and when he heard me, the man shot me. I looked back at the man and said, “Why did you shoot me?” I went back inside because maybe I could shoot his fat stomach off. The man said, “Please do not shoot me.” Boy, am I glad he fell down and died.

Last Christmas, I had a Christmas surprise. I heard a noise as I was in by bedroom. Quickly, I jumped up to run to see who it was. Carefully, I went downstairs. I saw a fat man eating all of the food out of the refrigerator. I was so afraid I ran upstairs to get a gun. I went outside to see if he was there. I shot my gun. When he heard me leaving, he belched. I looked back at the man and asked, “Who are you?” I decided to go back inside because my gun was out of bullets. The man left before I could find my bullets. Boy, am I glad I had to get in bed.